The four guardians found the footprints at the edge of the Forest of Spirits, so many that, at first glance, it looked as though an entire army had passed beneath their watch.
This was a great read. But I honestly felt a little more horrified at the events unfolding. Like shit got REAL. But the end was sad nonetheless. Dope work
i mean a request followed by or you're grounded usually gets the request done...a request followed by or you'll die and im thinking middle of the path head down walk forward don't leave the path ....just me?
WELL THAT WAS MESSED UP BUT IT'S A GOOD CHANGE FROM DRAGONS-DYING-MESSED UP
🤣🤣 I love that dragons are in higher threshhold of sad for you than humans.
BWAHAHAHHAHA
Sorry not sorry 🤣🤣
Well I mean if your dragons are what most dragons are like then I would feel the same.
Heehee xD you hear that, Deleiri? Compliments.
Deleiri: Compliments and cookies 😌😌😌 I'm so well cared for this month.
🫶 so deserved.
Whoa! I was not expecting that twist! Masterfully done, Tamsin!
Also, I loved the building up of tension through most of the story! Gave it such a mysterious, unsettling edge!
🤣 part of that was running out of room in my word count. But thank you so much!!
Unexpected ending!
The price you pay for stepping off the path is irreversible.
Yikes!
What a sad circular story. A Groundhog’s Day type repetition that will never end.
This was a great read. But I honestly felt a little more horrified at the events unfolding. Like shit got REAL. But the end was sad nonetheless. Dope work
Ooh, a recursive loop! Well played!
Ohh thank you so much!! I thought it would be fun. 😁
Oh my goodness 😱
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OK I've read both and this one is sadder, 1st prize
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A price for immortality indeed!
Such a horrible price.
A great story, very captivating but for sad? For me, only 😭😭 out of 😭😭😭😭😭.
That just means I need to write more 🤣.
Intriguing logic, let's see how it plays out 😂😂
🤣 Growth mind set, it's a great way to handle failure.
so, I haz Soo many questions? *blink* *blink* why come they didn't stay on the parh? they had like one rule? ...how hard is it to follow one rule?
Some people aren't very good at following rules 🤷
are they 4?!?
i mean a request followed by or you're grounded usually gets the request done...a request followed by or you'll die and im thinking middle of the path head down walk forward don't leave the path ....just me?
Lol your smarter than most people though 😂.
I had better reasons for them to die but I only had so much words. 🤣
Fantastic story, Tamsin! I really enjoyed the read!